WFR is more self directed roleplaying writing, or at least as I was conceiving it. Basically the author/player is handing it back to the GM when they decide they want outside/GM input in the story. It’s a way of writing where the player has all the control they want within the parameters of the world and setting, but can always reach out for things unforeseen or unknown or alternative to help reset or whatever is required at the moment. So it could be back and forth every paragraph (though I see logistical issues arising with that, since we can’t even arrange a couple of hours for a live game), or it could be pages and pages of writing and then throwing it back to the GM for a small section, before continuing on. Or it could be one day a back and forth, the next day pages and pages. I think WFR stands for Writing, Free-Roleplay.

@Quint I like the whole setting of Le Macon marching along and waiting around on the bottom of the lake. You made the hair thing a much more vital element than I was expecting! In the notes you theorized why she’s hanging out in the lake, and that she’s afraid that people may still be looking for her. If a young witch had escaped the Magikar and made it to perceived safety, only to then be accused of witchcraft, tied to a stone and flung into a lake to see if she floats - I think if she floated she’d be guilty of witchcraft. So, suggesting that she’s been hiding out in the lake since her trial by water.

I didnt see it as a lack of empathy, rather a lack of ability 9r knowledge. In how to connect, how to show his inner feelings how to approach what to him were the insurmountable challenges in life. Give him a practical task of building somthing, or solving some problem, and he could do it, or figure out how to do it, give him the nebulous task of forming a relationship and he was lost, indeed he might not even have realized there was an issue at all.

@Quint you remember Big Mama from your Cyberpunk RED one shot. I pulled something from my old computer and she was there and not getting enough spotlight haha.

@Hexlor You’ve still got another chapter left. Get ready for another reward session, you sweet summer child.