@Hexlor
Yes, agreed.
I’m going to need some time with the character to get a feel for that, I think.
Same as above, though I think I have some ideas there. He has a very strong sense of duty, and duty to Amerel might be the main reason. Lurking deeper, the outbursts would seem to indicate to me that somewhere down there, so deep down that I don’t think you could find it with floodlights and rappelling gear, Le Maçon perhaps did have feelings for his family. But we’ll need to see.
He still looks pretty human (for a Venge), I think James and I brainstormed about this somewhere.
I’m meh about keeping the bio as a live doc, might just be laziness on my part. It was meant to be a summary of the intro chapters that filled in some additional stuff that I couldn’t really get in there, like looking like Leonardo Da Vinci.
Incidentally, I do like the questions about his personality and potential plot inconsistencies. I hope it does come through that I have a pretty developed idea of him in my head, but don’t have the skills to write an entire psych profile or the like - I find it helpful to talk about what he’d do and why, which is where most of these questions go. So feel free to heap it on.