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@Hexlor Thank you so much for your comments about the ever of the chapter. They may have been more useful if they indicated any knowledge whatsoever of the chapter. Bless.

“… not in the Lowvess (Loveless) Imperial Penance Dungeon”

With dread I realized our destination, and soon that fear was confirmed we headed straight across to the Wastrials and up a canal in the shore. We were going to the Loveless, the infamous Lowvess Imperial Penance Dungeon. I’ve never heard of anyone leaving there, not even the dead…

And, from the end:

Owen and Lemmy were led into the Loveless tunnels.

“I don’t recall Lemmy persuading the staff to let the resident surgeon see Owen…”

But one the guards told me how Lems badgered and harassed those unloading him till they finally got their on-base surgeon to have a look at me. I imagine I was pretty close to dead, since I was blacked out for three days.

Been a while, reread the last few chapters and started sitting down to write ch 18. Just to make sure that I understood ch 17, is the following an accurate (broad-stroke) summary:

• Roddy kept L&O a bit longer after the initial meeting with Fassogen in 15, exercising them; Owen is ill
• He then locked each of them up in ‘capture racks’, and they were loaded onto a rowboat rowed by a four-armed figure
• They were taken to the Lowvess (also called Loveless) Imperial Penance Dungeon
• Lemmy persuaded the staff to let the resident surgeon see Owen, resulting in a surgery which enabled Owen to start recovering
• L&O are exercised for a week, only seeing guards in the interim
• After that, they were still not inducted into the work force, though were allowed to mingle with other prisoners. This period lasted for a month and a half
• L&O were led up the tunnels to an underground facility south of the prison that reeked of magic and spilled fat. Roughly fifty slaves work here, and the four-armed figure is also present, wearing a Magikar mask. Whenever it shows up, two slaves are taken deeper into the tunnels, never to be seen again.

Is this accurate? Please correct me if there’s anything that isn’t, and also add if there are any considerations/points that you’d like me to be bearing in mind.

I had definitely not understood that the Wastrials were the Wastelands and that the work is by the Labs facility from Grey Venatic, that does clear some of this up.

If anyone is looking for ideas, towards the end of 15 I suggested that Fassogen was going to rat out Roddy’s side hustle to TFoG, which means that Roddy and/or some of the gang could always show up in collars.

I am quite confused. I can’t figure out how this fits in the continuity, but I’m probably also the only one who cares, so I’ll just shrug and keep on going, I guess?

I think I missed a chapter somewhere, but am also not sure that I’d need it anymore. Am I supposed to be the next writer?